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Figment
Apr 29, 2012 6:42:41 GMT -8
Post by danielkimbrell on Apr 29, 2012 6:42:41 GMT -8
Real Name: The Figment of Imagination
Alias: Figment
Species: Dragon
Nationality: American, though imagined.
Alignment: Good
Affiliated: The Dream League
Abilities and powers: He can use the power of imagination to make anything happen.
Weakness: His missing friend Dreamfinder.
Character information: Figment was created by an imagination expert named Dreamfinder, and he has never forgotten him. One day, when Figment was waiting for Dreamfinder to take him to The Dream Port, Figment waited and waited and waited, but Dreamfinder never came. Figment ended up getting a job at The Imagination Institute in Epcot City just so he could make some extra money. Dreamfinder has never been found again, and Figment has ever since then been battling his fears that Dreamfinder was caught by The Toon Patrol. Figment has been sad since Dreamfinder has been gone. His friend and creator has been missing since 1991, and he has been used ever since then by Dr. Nigel Channing for experiments, and they took credit for creating him. His goals are to make people use their imaginations for good, but he had to get an office job instead, cutting his mischief down two notches.
Voice actors: Billy Barty and Dave Goelz.
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Post by The Black Duckette on Apr 30, 2012 15:28:50 GMT -8
I like it but its not up to me to judge.
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Dreamchild
Dream League Admin
The Dream Come True
"Open your mind..."
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Figment
Apr 30, 2012 18:20:37 GMT -8
Post by Dreamchild on Apr 30, 2012 18:20:37 GMT -8
You picked a great character! Figment's cool. However, this profile is simply too vague. Please expand it with a more fleshed out history for the character. We know he's Figment, but who is Figment? We know he's a dragon with the powers of imagination. We know he works in the Imagination Institute in Epcot City. But could you please explain the precise details of his creation? Exactly why has the Dreamfinder vanished? How has the Dreamfinder's disappearance affected Figment?
What is Figment's emotional drive? What's his goal? Is he noble? Mischievous? I want to know who this character really is, so please expand your profile. Be imaginative, if you'll excuse the pun!
Edit: Check out some of the other character profiles, such as Sunshine (sorry for the vanity, as I play her), She-Wolf, the Masked Mallard, the Coachman, Mechnician, etc. for examples of great examples for profiles.
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Cold Shadow
Dream League Admin
Shadow of Justice
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Figment
Apr 30, 2012 18:25:55 GMT -8
Post by Cold Shadow on Apr 30, 2012 18:25:55 GMT -8
Yeah, this is way too vague. Take a look at some other profiles located in this board for a better idea of what is expected.
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Post by The Black Duckette on May 1, 2012 17:33:12 GMT -8
I am Daniel's fiancé and he told me he has redid his character profile. He forgot to comment here and tell you so I am doing it for him.
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Dreamchild
Dream League Admin
The Dream Come True
"Open your mind..."
Posts: 206
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Figment
May 1, 2012 23:12:05 GMT -8
Post by Dreamchild on May 1, 2012 23:12:05 GMT -8
It's good to see you expand your profile. However, I have two concerns. 1) Where exactly is the Dream Port? Is it in the city? If it's in the city, how has it been kept under wraps? Is the Dream Port separate from the Imagination Institute? 2) The Toon Patrol can't exist in the Dream League canon, because there are no "cartoon" or "live-action" characters, as explained in this section. Please read these threads to get a better idea of the Dream League universe, which is less cartoony, more 'realistic.' That's not to say that Figment can't be imaginative and manipulate reality to be more whimsical. The bottom line is, there's no Toon Patrol. The weasels can appear, but they're not 'cartoons.'
Does that make sense?
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